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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Overall, I would say that the feedback I have received has been extremely helpful. My favorite comments that I receive are the ones that tell me a positive about my story and then also give a suggestion on how to fix something that they did not like. I would say the feedback I have been giving has been helpful, I try and give a couple of positives about their writing but also give a suggestion on what I think will help improve it. While looking at other people's writings and stories I have found some good strategies and good ideas on what to incorporate in my stories. I am happy with my introduction post, I think it gives people a good idea of what I am like and who I am as a person. I really enjoy reading other people's blogs and getting to know other people in my class even though it is an online class. I think in order to make my comments more useful I need to look at the other comments and try to suggest something that has not already been suggested. For my comments I think I need to look at what the most common thing people are saying as a suggestion and prioritize that as what I need to fix. I think my comment wall is working well and I look forward to the comments that will be coming in the next couple of weeks.

I chose this image because it talks about great aspects that should be in all feedback. It is important to be specific and give positive and corrective comments. 

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