Week 14 Storylab: Writers Write

Writers Write

the tone of your story is crucial
tone conveys the entire attitude of the story
the tone is not the same as voice
voice is the personality
tone is conveyed through diction
tone should always be communicated clearly
body language in stories makes the story come to life
a good majority of communication is non verbal
use body language in moderation
try to avoid the word "very"
there are 45 other words to use instead of very
character traits are crucial when creating a character
traits are formed by the behavior
every character should have positive and negative traits

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